Manami N (mana) (100 unread)
My aunt spends time at Australia for one week. She gifts my family chocolate and brandy. Today is extra lesson day, but I don’t have lesson, so I went to beauty salon to cut hair. I cut 10 cm. My feeling is light. I have New Year party with circle member tomorrow. After that I will go to karaoke with Yoshiko, Narumi, and Misaki. Before New Year party, I will go to Parco with Narumi and Misaki. I want to buy clothes.
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I got many gifts from my friends Rie and Narumi. Thank you for gift. It was very delicious. Rie went to Kobe, Osaka, and Kyoto. Narumi went to China by herself. She spoke only English. She is courage. And mother’s friend gives the gift too. He went to Korea!!!!!!! I really want to Korea many times. Food is very delicious, and I want to buy cosmetic and clothes!! I will go to Korea this summer vacation to practice training, but I think before summer vacation, I want to go spring vacation or golden weeks.
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I went to Jolly pasta with my friends Aska and Misaki. I ate too much. I thought I have to lose my weight to ceremony, but I didn’t patience. Ha. Ha. We talked when we were junior high school student. We are same junior high school. I enjoyed lunch time.
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I read the magical book. At last, I finished book reviews!!!
Hero is Leo, his great grandfather died, so he became a king. He found book. The book was set with jewels. He opened first page. On the first page he saw a beautiful painted butterfly. The butterfly fluttered its red and yellow wings and flew out of the book. Next, he opened third page, he saw the giant red dragon, and it flew away. The dragon ate people, so he opened book again. “Hippogriff,” he read and watched as the picture came to life, and he try to fight to dragon with hippogriff.
(104 words)
Nesbit, E. (2007). The Magical Book. London: Usborne House.
I read Story of Fairies. It book has three stories. I like First story and second story.
First story is tooth fairy’s story. Crystal had passed her final test at the tooth fairy training school. Now, she could turn children’s baby teeth into money. But her lazy classmate had failed all her test. She thought “It’s not fair!!” So she stole Crystal’s wand.
Second story is forgetful fairy’s story. One day, queen “here are the invitations, don’t forget anyone with an invitation can come, so only give them to guests on the list.” Lily put the invitations in her basket, but her basket break.
(104 words)
I read Alice in Wonderland.
One day, Alice saw rabbit. He cried “Oh dear! I shall be too late!!” She chased after rabbit, and pop down a large hole. There was wonderland. She is always curious. She met very big caterpillar, Cheshire cat, and mad hatter and so on. They are interesting and strange persons. It song was interesting. “Twinkle, twinkle, little bat! How I wonder what you’re at! Up above the world you fly like a tea tray in the sky.”
Next year, we can watch Alice’s new story. Mad hatter was performed by Johnny Deep, and white of queen was performed by Anne Hathaway. She is the most favorite actress for me. I have her DVDs. She is really cute, and beautiful.
(124 words)
I read Hansel and Gretel. Their step mother is heartless person. They are always starving. Step mother had an idea. It was take Hansel and Gretel deep into the forest. Their father couldn’t oppose.
Next day, they were abandoned by step mother. Hansel and Gretel lost their way, but then, they found house. It was made by sweets. They are ate doorknob, window, and so on. An old woman hobbled out. She said “I love visitors, you must come inside.” The kind woman laid out a magnificent meal for them. “Would you like to stay the night??” she asked. They nod; they didn’t notice she is witch…
(107 words)
Grimm, J.A.W. (2005). Hansel and Gretel. London: Usborne House .
I read Little Red Riding Hood. This is very famous story. I had read when I was kindergartener.
This is sharp Wolfe and docile girl’s story. One day, her mother said “Please take vegetable soup for your grand mother.” Little girl riding hood said “Ok.” And her mother told her rule. “Don’t talk wolves.” Little girl riding hood go to her grand mother’s house. Sharp wolf look her, and he thinks try to eat her. Wolf got her grand mother’s house before little girl, and he ate her grand mother. He pretends her grand mother. Then, little girl knock the door and in the house. She perfectly believes he is her grand mother.
（113 words）
Davidson, S. (2006). Little Red Riding Hood. London: Usborne House.
I read three wizard stories. First wizard takes care of many children, but they have no money. At Christmas, children couldn’t get present, and eat turkey, so they crept into the wizard’s room, and found Laughing powder.
Second wizard is resembles Harry Potter. Ha. Ha. His name is Mott. This story is wizard and fool man and his wife’s story. It was funny.
Third wizard really resembles Dambledore. Suddenly, the robber hits wizard’s head. Wizard dropped the gold, and tied to a tree by robber. After that, he went to castle, and knocked. King and queen is to treat him kindly. They has stolen theirs gold, so wizard and they try to revenge to robber.
(115 words)
Rawson, C. (). Wizards. London2002: Usborne House.
My bicycle’s basket is bended!!! Oh my god!! It is worst! What happened to my bicycle?? First, I shocked, but after that I went to Joyfull with my friends Miku, Kaori, and Yuki. I ate French fry set lunch. I like French fry. It was delicious.
Today, I saw nice grand father. He wore smart suits, hat, and driving open car. I surprised!! He was very nice.
By the way, I spent e-mail to my assistants. I have five wonderful assistants, but they didn’t answer. I feel depressed. I wish I get answer from my assistants tomorrow.
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I read Puss in boots. I have memory about it book. When I was kindergartner, I played princess in puss in boots. My childhood friends were play puss and king.
Do you know it story?? It is very kind and clever puss and woeful master’s story. Puss is really clever cat. Puss’s master’s name is Tom. He really woeful person, but at last, he can marry king’s daughter. His owe all his success is to puss. Puss ate troll. Puss deceived troll and stupid troll transform a little mouse, and puss ate troll. Tom got troll’s house. Puss is really clever. Tom and puss are deceived king and king’s daughter. He didn’t tell her true thing. Will He deceive his wife forever???
(122 words)
Yesterday, my cousin’s the festival day for children aged seven, five and three. He is four years old, he born at January seventeenth. He is really cute. I keep this picture in my cell phone. He is young and powerful, so he always says “Let’s play battle.” I’m already twenty years old, so sometimes I feel limit of my power. Ha. Ha. Ha.
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Today is KDS’s Thanksgiving Day. KDS is my driving school. My instructor acts this party, so I went to there with my friend Yumiko. She graduated from driving school yet. My instructor and Yumiko’s instructor is same person. I drank juice, popcorn, tempura, and so on for free. I rode police motorcycle. It is really cool, and high. I and Yumiko was take picture. We excited. I saw demonstration. It is cool so much!! We said “Cool!!” again and again. We enjoyed it.
After that, I went back my home. My mother said “Your grand mother sickness.” So I worried her, and I asked my grand father. “She is OK??” Grand father said “Don’t worry. Your grand mother is over eating.” I laughed.
(123 words)
I read little mermaid. How sad story is!! I felt sad read it. She is only fifteen. She teat statue of a boy, very cherish. On her fifteenth birthday, she set off for the surface, and she met prince like a statue of a boy. I thought it was destiny. I want to it story is happy end. She really wants to meet him again, so she met sea witch. Sea witch knew everything. Sea witch demand to her pretty voice. At last, she got two legs.
She spent happy day with the prince. When she wobbling on her new feet, he said “Take my arm, I’ll show you around.” He is kind person. I thought they love each other, but one day, he said. “I was swept to a beach and woken by a lovely princess. Tomorrow I’m going to set said and marry her.” Oh it is awful. She couldn’t go back her family and sea palace. She sits on a rock and looks over the water, thinking of her prince. It is really sad story.
(178 words)
Hans, A. (2007). The Little Mermaid. England: Usborne House.
I like cotton candy. Do you like it?? I bought it at school festival. Cotton candy usually has white color. I wanted to eat colorful cotton candy, so I pleased to buy pink cotton candy. It is really cute isn’t it?? I really like it. I saw purple cotton candy at Australia. I wanted to buy it, so I regretted!!! How make colorful cotton candy?? I want to try making colorful cotton candy.
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Today was unlucky day for me. I would go to park dome to play tennis with seniors and juniors, but I couldn’t go there, because I had very important class for me. We would play tennis from eight o’clock to ten o’clock, but plane was change. Seniors and juniors play tennis from seven o’clock, so I couldn’t play tennis with them. I was looking forward to play tennis from yesterday, so after the class, I went back to house. My parents were fight. They take it on me!! It was awful, so I got irritate with them. They call a truce now, because my father’s friend comes now. I can’t satisfaction, so I bought it. I’ve ever drank cola chock, but I’ve never zero version. It is better than normal version. I like it.
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Today is my first plan to play with circle member. I send e-mail for seniors, friends, and juniors. I want to come many members, so thirty people were gathering. I pleased.
We played Bowring. I prepared prize confectionery!! They look pleased, and enjoyed, so I pleased too. My team couldn’t win. Ha-Ha. My scour was only seventy. My junior has a torn muscle, but his scour was seventy one. He said “I have torn muscle, but I beat you at Bowring!!” He is impudent. Ha. Ha. Ha. He is very funny person.
After the Bowring, I played billiards with my friends. I’m not good at play billiards, but I like play it. I understand billiards rule a little bit. Seniors are really good at play it!! I’m surprised. Today was really fun. I worried about they could enjoy. They said “Today was really interesting. Thank you!!” My seniors said too. I pleased.
My body is pain, because I tumbled down the stairs. It was really pain. My leg, thigh, waist are very pain!!!! I can see bruise at leg and waist.
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It is twilight!! Of course do you know twilight?? I introduced it many times in my blog. I thought my friends don’t like hear about twilit. I always talk about twilight. I really like twilight. May be not like, I love Twilight!!! My family and friend think I’m crazy… but I don’t mind.
Twilight is too interesting!! I have all series, DVD, sound track. At last, I can buy sound track!! I wanted to buy sound track a long time. I always listening music. I am satisfied. Especially, I like super massive black hole, Decode, and Bella’s lullaby. Super massive black hole sung by Muse, and Decode sung by Paramore. Bella’s lullaby is classic. It is healing me.
November 28, I can watch Twilight (New Moon). It is second story. I can’t wait. I want to watch soon. I will go to watch with my friend Yoshiko. She likes too, because I recommendation Twilight for her. I always said to her “Twilight is really interesting and hot!! I want you to read it!!” She bought paper book. She read English version’s Twilight. I have both Japanese version and English version, but I don’t read English version yet. She finished read. She is really clever. I regard for her. I really glad to her likes
Twilight. We want to watch Twilight soon.
I watched DVD many times. If you interest in Twilight, I want you to read or watch Twilight. You will like hero and heroine. Hero’s name is Edward, and heroine’s name is Bella. I like them. If they real person, I want to meet them.
(266 words)
I read Snow White. It story is very famous. I think every one know it.
One day, a young queen wished “I wish I had a child with skin as white as snow, lips as red as blood, and hair as black as ebony wood.” I thought she is greedy, but her wish came true. The king named her Snow White. His joy was mixed with misery, for the queen died, so he thought my child need mother, and he had married again. The new queen was proud and vain. Her heart was full of love for herself. She always asked magic mirror. It is her favorite thing. “Mirror, who’s the fairest of us all?” Mirror said “It’s Snow White.” Queen was really angry, so she decided to kill Snow White. Queen tried to kill her three times. Although, Snow White was never die. Finally, Queen gave poison apple, and Snow White fall down, so seven dwarfs cried and laid her in a glass of coffin.
You know, it is happy end story. I don’t like so. I thought Snow White stupid. Can you eat poison apple, if you get form stranger. I can’t. She put them to trouble. Prince fell in love corpse. Is it good story?? I like Disney’s version Snow White.
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Today, I was making albums to give seniors. Only partial friends were made me offensive!! Especially guys are easy going, so I got angry, because we have to finish until school festival. Why they so easy going??? I usually easy going, but he is too easy going!!! Originally, we are good friends, but I got angry for him. Can I make up with him tomorrow?? I don’t know…Making albums are very hard for me. I have many home works. I have big stress. I want to quit!!
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After the field day, I went to training camp to make Tapioka with my circle member. We are going to sell Tapioka. We made many taste, hot chocolate, strawberry milk, cocoa, lemonade, caramel and so on. I tried to drink all taste, but I drank at midnight. Every juice was too sweet, so I feel bad, I wanted to throw up…but I couldn’t, because my senior saw me.
At dinner, we cooked curry and salad. 51 people came to training camp, so we had to cook a lot. It was hard!!! We had to wash many dishes, vegetables. Guys refilled many times, so I surprised!! After the dinner, we took bath, but bath room is narrow, and pair of futon only 25!! So I couldn’t sleep futon. It was worst. NIsigo city is cold. It was really worst!! I wanted to sleep my bed.
After the camp, I had part time job. It was hard for me. I wanted to go back house and sleep. Yesterday was tired day.
My body is pain and I feel lock of sleep now…
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The day before yesterday, I went to KUG, because I had field day. I would run in relay, but I wouldn’t. Because senior mistook, so I can’t run in relay, I think I’m lucky!! Field day was interesting. Readers were disguise and run. It was really interesting. I didn’t know our team win or lose. I want to know.
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I read Kings and Queens of Britain.
Today, I ate dinner in cafeteria with my friends. My friend Yuki, she ate curry buckwheat noodles. I asked “Is it delicious??” Yuki said “Try eat,” so I tried. It wasn’t bad, but also delicious.
Yesterday, I cut my hair, and colored. My friends said “Your hair is good!!” I felt happy. Day after tomorrow, I will eat kimchi nabe with my circle friends. I like kimchi nabe. I can’t wait. Day after tomorrow will be good day.
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Have you ever read Romeo and Juliet?? I’ve never, so I tried to read it, and I’m sold on it. It has happiness and sadness. I like it. But ending is really sad. I’m cried when I read last scene. It is the most famous story, and writer is famous too. Every one knows Shakespeare. I want to buy it, and read both, English version and Japanese version. I want every one to read it. It is really interesting.
Romeo is a brave and passionate person, and Juliet is a gracious and beautiful person. Romeo always says “she is blight!!” Romeo is very romantic. I really like it story. When I read it, I felt happy and sad. They can marriage, but they can’t live together, and…I felt sad, and poor their parents. I want Romeo and Juliet to lived happily ever after in heaven.
(145 words)
Shakespeare, W. (). Romeo and Juliet. England: Penguin Books.
Yester day, my cousin has field day. I watched it with my ground parents, aunt, mother, and father. His event was footrace, relay, and so on. My cousin was sly, so every one was laugh. I was laugh too. He is really cute. In lunch time, we ate it. It was gorgeous, and delicious!!! I took camera, and video. It was tired, so I wanted to sleep.
After that, he isn’t tired. He did origami, and I went to part time job. It was hard!!!
(85 words)
I read “Marcel goes to HOLLYWOOD.” It book is interesting!! I like it. I think I want to read more this series. This book’s hero is Marcel and Celine. I think they are French mice. I want to go to HOLLY WOOD like them.
He is a detective, and she is a painter. They took bus, airplane and so on, and they go to hotel (it is film director’s house.) It is beautiful, and looks like comfortable. This night, director’s daughter kidnapped, and Marcel try to help to director’s daughter. He is a detective!! I thought he is very wise. I will look for this series in library. It is really interesting.
(112 words)
Hopkins and Potter, A.A.J. (2000). Mercel goes to HOLLYWOOD. England: Penguin readers.
I read Sleeping Beauty. This book’s picture is very beautiful. Especially, I like fairies picture. It is so beautiful, and this story was interesting, so I absorbed. I like happy end!! I think happy end is the best story.
Princess Rose is the most beautiful all over the country. She likes to sketch the prince of her dream. After that, she pricked her finger and fell asleep. But finally, brave prince came to her palace and helped her. He taking her hand, and kissed!! Her eyes flickered open. She cried “You are the prince I drew.” Princess and Prince were married the very next day. It is wonderful isn’t it?? I like it.
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Sims, L. (2006). Sleeping Beauty . England: Usborne House.
Today was interesting day. I thought I like my circle.
After the class, I went to down town with my circle member to buy senior’s present. We went to many shops, and we worried. But finally, we could buy nice albums. Our senior don’t know that we making present. They will surprise. I want to make wonderful album and give present!! After the shopping, we ate seven ice creams. My friends really like ice cream. I can’t believe!! But, I ate seven ice creams. I feel fullness.
After that, we went to Joyfull with my circle members. We were thirty people, so clerk was surprise. We ate good meal, and talked a long time. It was so fun. We laughed a long time.
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I read Stories of Dolls. I remember when I child food. I had a lot of dolls. I played and slept with my dolls, but I don’t play and sleep with them, because I grew up…I remembered by this book. My dolls sleep in my cloth set. I don’t meet my dolls, so I will meet my dolls.
I read ALADDIN. Have you ever seen Disney’s movie Aladdin??? Disney’s version is Aladdin is cool and heroin; he has very intelligent monkey, and Genie is blue. But book version’s Aladdin look like idiot, he has no pet, and I’m shocked, because Genie isn’t blue, and he looked like old man. Why he isn’t blue?? As for Genie, he is blue and unique. But it was only Disney…(◎□◎；)))))
One day, Aladdin met Abanazar. He said “I’m your uncle.” But it was lie he is wizard. He ask look for lamp to Aladdin, so Aladdin go to cave, and he get lamp, but Abanazar locked. Aladdin has a trouble, but Genie is helps him, and Genie give palace and so on. For a time Aladdin got marry with Badr. Abanazar get angry and try to kill. But, he can’t. Next, Abanazar’s brother tries to kill Aladdin. Badr is credulous, so she deceived by evil…
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It is the most favorite Korean drama. I can’t choose witch drama are favorite 宮 or boys over flowers. I like both very much. I introduced about boys over flowers. I have only box I. I can’t buy box II and III yet. I have to save the money!!!
宮 is interesting so much. It is love and comedy story. I went to location one of the宮 when I went to Korea. I really excited. Of course I took the picture. Hero and heroin are so cool and cute. I like them. It is my treasure, but my friend damaged it. I’m shocked. I got angry and cried, but he didn’t know he damaged my DVD. I don’t mind now, and look for service station.
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This summer vacation, we determined post, and my post is head of project. I have a lot of tasks. It is hard for me. Our chief isn’t helps me!! He is undependable. He ignore me when I consulted…One day, he talked me “I want to BBQ with my circle member to enhance friendship.” So I said “Ok! I’ll help you.” But he isn’t preparing, so I prepare to BBQ now. He isn’t helps me…(×口×;;;) But other friends help me. So we feel need to talk about our chief. And we went to Jolly pasta and complained about chief.
Next Sunday, only heads gather and talk to. I don’t want to fight. But it is obliged to fight…I feel scary. >>
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Yesterday, I had dance party with my circle friends. There were many people in hall. They wore own costume. I saw who wore one piece character’s costume. They were so cool. I really excited. My tension is high. I drank with my friends. After that, we went to wonder. We played game. It is Korilakkuma. I wanted to get it, so I requested to get it for my senior, and my senior got it!! I felt happy. It is cute very much. My friends played pro drum. They were good player. After the game, we went to Tatsunoya with my circle member. We ate noodle. It was delicious very much.
After the dismissal, we went to Lawson, and we bought ice cream, and we talked until midnight. So today, I’m so sleep and tired. Any way, surprisingly I enjoyed dance party.
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Yesterday, I made costume to dance party with my circle friends Narumi, Yumiko and Yuki. I’m poor at needlework, so I couldn’t help my friends… (._.;;;) I measured size and thread rubber. I could only these. I thought I’m good for nothing.
We made costume at one o’clock. I really wanted to go back home and sleep. Today, I have class from 1 period, but I skipped…
Any way, we go to dance party tomorrow.
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This is the most favorite Korean drama. I like it so much. This drama is very interesting, and I like F4. Do you know F4?? They are really cool. I like so much. The most like member is Lee Minho. I like him so much. He is really like him. I want to enter his fun club. I really want to meet him!!!! And I want to buy box II and III, but it is very expensive. I have no money…I want someone to present for me. This story is same Japanese story a little bit. I think Korean’s F4 is the best cool F4. I already watched last story in Korea. Of course line was Korea, but I could understand, because I had watched Japanese version, so I could understood.
Any way, I like this drama so much.
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Today was end of silver week and end of summer vacation. I went to down town with my friends Yoshiko and Miku. They are so funny. I like them. We went to PALCO, TUTAYA, and New-s. We bought clothes and shoes. I like it, and I satisfied. We went to ice shop. I ate two ice creams, but my friends ate seven ices!!!
I have to go to school tomorrow from first period. Can I get up early??? May be I can’t …
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I ate Korean food. It is my mother’s favorite food. It is hot, so I drank cups of water. This dish has sausage, noodle, kimchi, rice cake. It is very delicious. We ate it in Korea. Noodle was very delicious when I was eating in Korea, but when I was eating in Japan, noodle was swollen.
Recently, I always watch DVD. Almost I watch Korean drama. My mother watches too. So I listening Korean every day(>v
Do you know these pirates?? One piece is the most poplular comic all over the Japan. It is puzzle. My shop is sale it. I wanted to buy all member, but this puzzle sold out now...(/へ\;;) I wanted to buy it... I read this comic and watch the TV. One Piece is very interesting comic. I like it.
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At last, I could go to Korea. I went to Korea for 18~21 days with my mother. I felt really happy. We went to my favorite drama's location, Myeongdong, Dongdaemun, Nangdaemun.
First day, we went to Coffee Prince’s location and we made friends. After drank cup of coffee, we eat チヂミ. It was delicious. After the dinner we went to Seoul tower and went to Myeongdong. Myeongdong is downtown. There were many people and shop. I wanted to go to Etude House. Etude House is cosmetic shop, and I bought many cosmetics. It is really cute. I took a picture. Anyway, Myeondong has many shops. If I haven’t map, I will be lost.
Second day, we went to location again. Next location is 宮’s location. 宮is my most favorite drama. I really wanted to go to location, so I could go there, I felt happy. Of course I took many pictures. After that, we went to Nangdaemun, and Myeongdong again. I bought shoes, cosmetic, and Kimchi. I bought kimchi about 1 kilogram. My mother got angry. Ha. Ha. Ha. I bought Welsh onion and perilla kimchi. It is delicious but so fiery. Korean food is very delicious, but fiery. I drank water every day. We went to coffee shop, and we met face. My mother was his fan, so she pleased. At dinner, we ate トゥブチゲ. It is noodle and cooked in a pot at the table.
Third day, we used subway, and went to Dongdaemun. There were many department stores. I bought clothes and shoes. Department stores have cute clothes. It is so cute.
I use Korean, Japanese, and English in Korea. Korea is very interesting. I want to go to Korea soon. My mother said “go to Korea again this winter vacation.” I’m looking forward to winter vacation.
Today, I watched “Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince.” It is volume 6. When I finished second period class, I went to Movie Theater soon!! I was very looking forward to watch this movie since two month, so I’m really exciting. It was very good. I want to watch twice or three times. Last sense was very sad. I cried.
I thought Harry Potter isn’t popular in Kumamoto, but I was wrong. Many people came to theater to watch Harry Potter. I’m surprised. I watched caption version. There were high school students, old woman and so on. Harry Potter is loved by many generations. I really like Harry Potter. You have to watch this movie♪♪
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Today is my friend’s birthday, so I presented it. It is Kapibara. She likes it very much. She glad to get it, and I’m happy. Oh, today I get present from my friend. She gives me lirakkuma!! It is strawberry series rilakkuma. I like this series very much, so I like it very much.
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Today is my birthday!! So I’m 20 years old now. My friends were send birthday mail. I felt very happy. At circle, seniors and friends was cracker, I’m very surprised and my mind blank. Ha. Ha. Ha. Do you know this character?? It is Rilakkuma. I like it very much, so my friend presented me. It is very cute. I like it.
I’m 20, so I can drink. Ha. Ha. I drank cocktail. It was good. Today is my birthday, and tomorrow is my friend’s birthday. I bought present, and I presented. I preparing send email to her.
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Three Billy-GoatsStudent ID: 08151
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C
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Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | Letter to Family | 2009.06.01 | 5 | 247 | 5 | |||
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | University Life | 2009.04.08 | 4 | 416 | 3 | |||
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Aloha | 2009.06.29 | 6 | 455 | 2 | |||
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | ||||
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | ||||
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | ||||
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | Three Billy-Goats | 2009.04.18 | 75 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | Ugly dackling | 2009.04.19 | 73 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | Pinocchio | 2009.04.29 | 106 | 1 |
BR 1-04 | The Shoemaker and the Elves | 2009.05.01 | 178 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | The Vampire Killer | 2009.05.04 | 192 | 0 |
BR 1-06 | Stories of Fairytale Castle | 2009.05.06 | 270 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | The Clumsy Crocodile | 2009.05.18 | 75 | 1 |
BR 1-08 | The Frog Princess | 2009.05.25 | 129 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | Narnia | 2009.06.06 | 204 | 0 |
BR 1-10 | Daianna Princess | 2009.06.15 | 111 | 0 |
BR 1-11 | Marie Antoinette | 2009.06.26 | 146 | 0 |
BR 1-12 | Frog and Toad | 2009.07.06 | 148 | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ||
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ||
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ||
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ||
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ||
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ||
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ||
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What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
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Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
I really happy, because at last!! I found my ipod. I feel really happy, so I listening to music every day. My favorite singers are Gwen Stefani, Black Eyed Peas, Miley Cyrus, ABBA, and Britney Spears. I really like them. I really like my ipod. It is cute isn’t it?? It color is pink!! I like pastel color. Especially, I like pink, sky blue, and purple. My room is very colorful, so I like my room. My room is the best place. I like reading favorite books, using computer, and watching favorite movies with cola and popcorn in my room.
(100 words)
I read “Frog and Toad All Year.” This story is interesting. Frog is scatterbrain, and coward. Toad is massive and active. They are very nice friend. Frog likes winter and snow. Why they don’t hibernate?? Ha. Ha. Ha. This book has five stories. I like story of ice cream. When I read this chapter, I went to cafeteria to buy ice cream. Toad has two ice creams, but ice cream was melting. It dripped down jacket, pants, and his feet. He cried “I can’t see!!” He looks like monster. It is funny. Every animal escaped from Toad. At last, he fell into the pound. Toad said to Frog “I’m sorry.” And Frog said “Never mine.” Oh, I thought Frog is kind. If you want to read this book, you can read at library. I read Frog and Toad series. It is interesting and cute. Toad is very funny.
YL=1.2~1.6
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On Friday, I played with my friends. They were same junior high school and basketball club, so they are tall!! But I don’t tall (-. - ;) We went to Joyfull. I ate ice cream. We chatted four hours at Joyfull. On the way, one of the friends joined us. She was same school, basketball club and tennis club. We chatted again. After that we decided to go to round one at twelve o’clock!! Then, we went to round one. I never went there. There are very good place. We played tennis, basketball, bowling, batting, Karaoke, and game. It was very interesting. I want to go to there again. We played until three o’clock. I felt sleep.
Next day, I had volunteer, so I woke up seven o’clock. I felt so sleep. I could sleep only two hours. We decollated to the Star Festival, and we played bingo game. Children were excited, so we feel happy. After the volunteer, I went to MacDonald with my friends. We ate hamburger. I like hamburger very much. MacDonald’s hamburger is very delicious. And I went to CD shop and I bought “The E・N・D.” I like Black eyed peas. I like “Boom Boom Pow” and “I gotta feeling.” These music are make me spirit.
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