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Do you know how to make rainbow? I know it. When it finished raining and at the same time, sunshine is bright, rainbow is made, but do you want to see rainbow in the time that you want to see? The story is about making rainbow.
Seven people make rainbow by The Rainbow Machine. When it finished raining, they start to make it in the sky and they send everyone happy. The machine was brought on a very big lorry.
At the time, six people went to restaurant. Pink was left to guard. A police came there, said he should move the lorry. He moved the lorry, but it fell into gutter. It is so bad. He cannot move it.
Then the children came there, he asked them to help him. “Will you push the lorry?” They pushed, but it was so bad. It is because the lorry is far too heavy and big. Suddenly it began to rain even though the sun was shining. He must make the rainbow. He helped them to make it. The children rode on the lorry. They made various rainbows. Everyone stopped to look at the rainbows. “It is funny rainbow!” they said. When the six people were eating lunch, they looked out of the window. “Oh no! What is that?” They went to Pink, but rainbows change a lot of various funny rainbows. They ran and ran. “Oh! No!” the sky was filled with red color. It is red sky. They had to do this before. They used SKY BLEACH, and the sky became to turn white all. It was not blue sky… but the sky will soon turn blue again.
What do you think white sky? It is wonderful. I like blue sky. Then shall we make the rainbow withme? See you .
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Hi, there are a lot of strange cultures that is thought “Strange!” for foreign people in Japan. I am interested in Tatami. We can see Tatami in almost of Japanese house. The sight of it, other foreign people cannot see any other country, so I want tell about Tatami.
Almost of Japanese cultures came from China, but Tatami is maken by Japanese ancients. In Japan, the meteorology is hard variety, for example, humidity is so high and temperature is so high in summer. Tatami is fit for Japanese environment, so it has used for just now.
In Nara~Heian Era, only member of nobility used to sit on it, and it was brought by hands. It was as like Japanese cushion. In kamakura~Muromachi Era, tatami was carpeted though room. It was used as like recent Tatami. From Momoyama Era to Edo Era, it was used for piece of design of Sukiya-Zukuri. It is important for tea ceremony. Tatami was first popularized in Meiji Era. Then many family use it usually, but after the World War 2, a lot of western culture came to Japan. One of them was wooden floor, chair and carpet. At the first, Tatami was main current in Japan.
Now, wooden floor is familiarizing so much. Wooden floor is cheaper than Tatami, but in many Japanese houses, Tatami is used now.
Why it is used in Japanese house unless it is expensive? I can live wooden floor without Tatami. There are some answers. Sight of Japanese, it is Japanese manner. Japanese put house hold Buddhist alter or household Shinto alter on Tatami. It is the place we became to be happy and healthy. Second, it is for comfortable for us. It is because Tatami has effects insulate from heat, soundproofing and control air. A researcher surveyed. There are causes that Japanese are involved with Tatami.
By the way, why didn’t Japanese infect culture of chair? Against Japanese, western and American is tend to sit on chair. “There are no bedridden people in England, they will be sit on chair” in a book. In Japanese, tired, they tend to lie. It is difference of culture between Japanese and Western.
Tatami is fit for Japanese environment, and Japanese sprits grew by Tatami. It made base of Japanese life style. It appear one of Japanse culture.
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Hi, I introduce the book “Christmas Adventure” How was your Christmas? I had good Christmas day! By the way, were you enjoying Christmas just only? The book story is that children who don’t help their family go adventure to wonderful world.
In Christmas, the children were excited, but their father worked hard to prepare to decorate, their mother cooked dinner for Christmas. The father was angry.
At the time their friends arrived, they gave the children Christmas presents. It is a magic key. The key took them to the Land of Father Christmas.
In the land, there is no Santa. The children came to Santa’s house. It is Christmas today, but Santa is sleeping. He is tired.
The children helped him to cook, decorate and prepare for Christmas. They worked hard very much. Then they enjoy Christmas party with Father Christmas!
Finally, they came back to real world, and they helped their parents for Christmas. It is good children. They had very good X’mas day.
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Hey guys! How is your Adult Age day? I was enjoying the day.
In the morning, I waked up, I worn my new suit and I was taken pictures with my family. After that, I went to a town office for the ceremony. I met many friends who were enjoying in junior high school days. I met one of my friends, he is good person and I was fine to see his face. Then I was surprised that a friend changed so much. When we were in junior high school, he was so fat, but now he is so smart and cool. It is wonderful. Then, I was talking with many friends about how they have been getting along. It is good time for me. I can’t understand girl’s making face. I didn’t who is who… but everybody became to be good persons.
That night, we went to hotel to take part in the alumni association in high school days. We were drinking together. I met my teacher, I talked her, and I was taught about my future.
We had good time. I was so happy. I want to met my friends again. please tell me your Adult Age day!
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Happy New Year! How was the winter vacation? I had good winter vacation. I had Osechi. Do you know Osechi? It is in Japanese foods happy new year. There are various foods in Osechi. For example, kombu-roll, gobo, renkon, shrimp, soy and so on. In my home’s osechi, I like Gameni, which is called Chikuzenni. I like the Gameni which my mother cooks. It is delicious. I was looking forward to eating it.
Next day I might go to my high school to play basketball with friends, juniors and seniors. It is OB battle. It was exciting so much. I enjoyed the games, but I don’t have stamina because I didn’t play exercise. It is one of causes. Another is smoking, so I decided to stop smoking.
That night, they enjoyed alumni meeting in basketball club. We wee eating and drinking so much. We were talking about school days, relationship and new lives.
Later the meeting, I came back home 3 o’clock. I was too fine. Next morning, I stayed in home for a day. I help my parents to work. It was so hard. I forgot the Gameni… “Is there more Gameni?” I said my mother, but “No, it is empty.” She said. “Oh! No!” I had looked forward to it… I must wait next year. So, I will be fine for this year. See you, please have a good your year. Ah! I didn’t go to a shrine. Shall we go a shrine?
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Christmas Eve
In Christmas Eve, I went to university to accept classes usually. In speaking class, almost of students in major of English gathered in one class. They quested any things to other students and they sang some Christmas songs. It was joyful class. I like the song “Last Christmas” it is good in the day. I want to song the songs written in English more and more. If I sing the songs, will my speaking capacity be up?
After the class, my girl friend and I went to downtown. We arrived some shops that we like. When we do as like things, we are enjoying. Then, we went to restaurant to have dinner because she was very hungry. She had rice with chicken. I had pasta. Each other dinner was like be delicious. I gave her half of it. I was also given half of it. It was good. After that we had desert. It is sweetly I want to go the restaurant again. The day is good Christmas Eve. I first spend Christmas Eve with girl friend. See you. Have your good Christmas.
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I introduce the book “The Troy Stone” Do you want to trip to a long long old days? The story, a boy has gone to Troy.
The Jackson family is on holiday. Mark sees something on the ground, and he get a stone. Suddenly there is white light in his eyes. Mark closes them. The light is strong. There is a loud wind in his head. He cannot hear or see anything. What is happen? When he wake up, there is old Troy. It is so surprising, but he was in battle between Troy and Greece. He was in crisis. It is scary.
When and where do you want to do time travel? I want to go Meiji Era. I want to meet Sakamoto Ryoma, and I want to talk him about Japan.
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I want to tell you about the book “Marcel And Mona Lisa” now. The story is that a mouse is finding the picture “Mona Lisa”
Marcel, he is a mouse in Paris. He often goes to Louvre to meet one of his friends. She is Celine. She is good for paint pictures. When he arrived her house in Louvre, the story starts. On his way, Mona Lisa was stolen to a new guard “Antonie” he disguised, stole Mona Lisa. Marcel traveled to Italy get it back. He is in a man’s bag, ride on train and boat, arrived Venice.
Arrived at their fastness, some villain talking, and there are many cats. It is scary for Marcel. Cats kill mice, but he save Mona Liza from them. It is brave mouse. He came back with Mona Lisa. He is a secret hero.
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I introduce the book “Maisie And The Dolphin” There are stories as like this in Japan. Then I tell you about this story. Please read it.
The heroin is Maisie, she lives in Bahamas and is thirteen years old. She likes swimming under water and she is often taken sea by granddad. Her parents are veterinaries each other. The hospital is next to the house. It is very old, but it is favorite house for her.
One day, Maisie and her granddad go to sea. At the time, she found the piece of wood under water. When she tells him about it, expensive big boat attacks a dolphin. The dolphin has hurt in his head.
When they took the dolphin to the hospital, that big boat arrived. Why did the boat arrive? There are an American “Carl Flint” in the house and her dad. They are talking. “You wanna give me $200,000 for the hospital and this house.” Carl said. When she hears this conversation, she became to be very sad.
She and the dolphin became to be good relationship. They swim together, she gives him food, and he became to be fine. Then it came the day that he is set free. It is time for him to go back home. Maisie is sad without him.
At the day, she and her granddad go to sea to set him free, he is very fine, and she found that he is holding a key. What is the key? She tough! It is for the piece of wood! She swam under water and she found a lot of gold coins in it.
The news was inserted in newspaper. It is wonderful. Then Carl is calling to her house, but her dad calls ”No, I don’t give you my house and hospital”, and the gold coins was used for new hospital.
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| 2-02a (2009.11.04) | essay posts: 2-02a Favorite Web in English | 2009.10.28 | 253 | 1 | 2 | 0 | 0 | |
| 2-02b (2009.11.18) | About Web Site | 2009.11.11 | 350 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| (2-02c) | BOB MARLEY'S SITE | 2009.11.18 | 419 | 0 | 2 | 0 | 0 | |
| 2-03a (2009.12.02) | On To Study Languge | 2009.11.25 | 485 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| 2-03b (2009.12.18/22) | On To Study Language | 2009.12.9 | 485 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
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We tell about the entertainment in KGU, and we found out some interesting answers! One of answers is the bowling place because they want to enjoy with friends in their free time.
Then, Movie Theater is also popular among KGU students. Some of them feel bowling when they are in free time. In amusements, they want to refresh!
This idea has some advantages! Many of them they can communicate with their friend, and they can also make new friends.
On the other hand it has some problem, amusements are not good for studying and some people may spend much money to play these.
In order to solve these problems, we asked the way to manage the amusement. For carrying on these, students will do a fund-raising campaign. Some students say we need to collect many signatures.
After the investigation, people who want some amusement in KGU, it makes them refreshed and for enjoyed their university life.
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Our group has criticisms against Yurina, Hikaru and Shoko’s group. Their plan is that they want to build more elevators and tunnels in university for convenience. Their opinion is these; there is not enough elevators in KGU, or the students sometimes can’t use elevators and some of them can’t be class on time. Handicapped people are also difficult to use the elevator because of the numbers of users.
They also have another opinion that they want to make tunnels to defend against the rain and the ultraviolet rays.
We disagree with their opinion, because we there are enough elevators in KGU. Handicapped people also can use the elevator now by thanks to the students’ kindness. Next, built the elevator in KGU, almost of students would depend on them. It is lack of exercise. The number of student who are not healthy may increase.
About the tunnel, we think making tunnel is waste of money, because we just have own umbrella in rainy days. Then we can also apply sunscreen in summer. We don’t need the tunnels.
I think we need to improve other problem in KGU for more useful things. In the opinion, it is wonderful idea, but some neck. They should improve our criticism for them.
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Do you have good university life? There are many problems in KGU, so our group thinks that we should improve better this university. One problem is that there is no entertainment place in KGU. In other universities, have some attractive places. They usually become their characteristics. We think that KGU is very comfortable, but we feel something lacking. Being entertainment places, for example, bowling place, karaoke or theater in campus, KGU students would be satisfied and enjoy university life more. Then in fact, there are some universities that have its bowling place, and its theater. It’s wonderful. We investigated how students feel about it. Then, we could understand students’ feeling, so tell the survey. Almost of people answered that they want bowling place and theater. The reason of the bowling place is that almost of students can enjoy with friends. As another reason, they can make new friends through playing bowling. The theater, most people like watching movies, and some go to theater to watch new movies and old movies. Movies make many people grown and they can communicate with friends by talking about watching movies. It means the theater will become a nice topic among the students.
If the entertainment place is built, we think the place where are next to fourteenth building is good, because now the place is for parking but people don’t make use of the place so much. Then, everyone needs to pay 100 yen to use these amusements, because it is good price for students who don’t have money so much.
However, this plan, there are also has some problems. First problem is money. How do respondents collect to build the entertainment place, to solve this problem, we have a solution. We are going to collect contribution from some sponsors, and the other way is to correct signatures to hand in Student Section in KGU. Next, another problem is that they are afraid that they may waste of money and waste of time without studying. The place may be a gamble places and students will not stand in the way of students studying. Generally, students must study. So we need to make some strict roles. For example, people who don’t have enough credits to graduate can’t use these.
We are interested this plan, because it may be a characteristic of KGU. We should build entertainment place, and this university will be finer than now.
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Hello, Everybody.
Yesterday, I went to a used clothes shop "DOLPHIN" and I have my shirt and pants repaired by the owner. My clothes are all fit and well. This is my favorite shop, and I often go here. There are various 50's~70's clothes. I look and wear them without buying, but shop staff say "if you find good clothes, please wear freely many times" then I was taught coordination. I became to like clothes more and more so that I enjoy them. Then, customers who are so cool go here to. I enjoy here. You really should go here. See you.
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Just now, I draw an illustration.
It is an alien who are wearing rabbit’s wig. He is selling good fruits and fresh vegetables. He is 35 years old, his work is a greengrocer, his hobby is playing guitar. Then, he is from moon. When the moon is full, he can go back there. There are his family and friends. He often comes to earth to talk with children in a village. Then, he talks about some story in the moon. They listen the stories, they are so happy. He is a wonderful alien.
That’s all. See ya and Good night.
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These days, I first had a green curry the night. The curry is being sold in front of Meigo Bridge in Kumamoto. How much? It is just 550 yen. When I see the green, I doubt that it is curry, but the taste is good. It was spicy, mellow and smell unique and ethnic. The curry taste is from Thailand. I fool taste of Thailand. I want to go here, and I want have curry and any other ethnic foods. Hove you ever been to Thailand? How about? I never have been to countries in Asia instead of Japan. I want to feel other culture with my heart and physic. By the way, do you know good ethnic restaurants or cafe in Kumamoto? I am looking for various restaurant that cooked delicious ethnic foods. See you, Good night. JAH KNOW
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After school, Conomi and I studied together in building 14. I worked ALC power words+ hard. She wrote blogs. Now, we are in pinch situation because we haven’t finished homework and don’t write blogs well. So, if I give up now, I must accept same classes. Oh!! NO!!! I cant win me, just do it!!!
Next, we go to Yayoi-ken that is a restaurant front of Kumamoto Gakuen University, to have dinner. I had fried seafood and stake. It was good!!! I was full so much, so I couldn’t move that time. She had hamburg. She had a surfeit of it. She was ought to go working. Had she been all right?
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Few days ago, Conomi and I use Skype for Uno in Canada. It is wonderful to chat for Canada from Japan for free. Then, we can see against by camera. I was surprised it than talking with her. It is like TV phone. You should use Skype!! Maybe, you will be impressed.
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Recently, don’t you hear the word in Japan? It is “Soshoku-Danshi” Do you know them? They are boys like grazing animals. So, like as herbivores. Then, I want to tell you about Soshoku-Danshi.
Do you know the reason that they are called “Soshoku”? The many various reasons seem to be. For example, a young who can’t confess to girl he likes, who doesn’t like going outdoor better than indoor, doesn’t like meats better than vegetables and are slim, white and sissy. Their grazing systems are gentle heart, not tied to masculinity and not greedy for love. It’s poor boys to be hurt or injured. There are many other reasons. They are thready, so people call them “soshoke-Danshi”
Whereas them, there are also young who are like lion, called “Nikushoku-Danshi” Unlike them, they like meats better than vegetables, like exercise, so active and strong. They are positive to lovemaking.
According to a survey, 60% of young are “Soshoku-Danshi” It’s so wonderful. There are a lot of zebra in Japan but a lot of women like “Nikushoku-Danshi” Then, women have been being strong. In them, there are people who can honestly say to boys. They dominate boys in Japan. Japan is lion’s territory.
By the way, which do you think I am zebra or lion? Speaking of which one, I like lion. I like meat and exercise. Then, I can say what I want to say to girls. However, I am slim and white. I apply some conditions to “Soshoku-Danshi”
There are various people. It is natural. Criticism from men, it is not good to separate either. Becuz, “Soshoku-Danshi” eat meats.
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I want to tell you about the Web sites which are written in English all. I introduce this. It is the site of Bob Marley.
First, he is a reggae musician in Jamaica. He lost the many songs and legend. Although he was dead thirty-six years old, his sprits and songs have been respected by a lot of people who are musician and artists in the world.
The web site has much information. For example, there are information that CD album and goods reproduced presently, his life, his family, foundation for him and so on. You can buy the goods and reggae CDs. Then, other information of other reggae musicians and music concert are showed, so we are able to get tickets easily and cheaply by inter net shopping. The site is streaming his song and page is colorful and fashionable. They can make us happy like as reggae songs that we are listening when we are sad. It is also one of good points.
Next, compared to the site that about The Beatles. The band group is most famous in the world. They affected to a lot of people in the world. Their songs is been streaming in various places now.
The site has much information too. Each member’s statuses now are showed. Then, like Bob’s site, apprizes CD album reproduced and goods and The Beatles’ history. Then, songs are streaming, it makes us been hamming. There is anything is similar to the Bob Marley’s web site. Regarded John Lennon, his wife, who is Ono Yoko is showing some photos she took during his lifetime. Like that, click one of member, fly to each other sites. It is like branches, but there is not in Bob’s site.
The site about Bob Marley is good, but there are some points that be improved to better. First of all, there are reggae music or Bob’s songs only, so should have many kind of music regardless reggae music. For example, click to jazz, to rock, to Japanese reggae and s on. This is one of point to be good web site. Second, Bob Marley was a Jamaican, so it leads to Jamaica’s information. There are people in the world loves Bob. If they go here to know him, they had better understand Jamaica. It is connected to economic impact.
Finally, the sites of musicians are similar to each other. There are some site be attracted us. They have any good points. Bob Marley’s web site has interesting point in the all.
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I want to introduce the sites. It is my favorite site written in English. It shows about Bob Marley.
Do you know him? I hadn't known when I first listened to reggae music. One day, my brother showed me his album. This Is "One Love" He has be called "god of reggae" says my brother. Then I listen his music. They are good music.
The site shows about Bob Marley. For example, showed information "new album, his career, song of any other reggae musicians, his goods…etc” Then they are attractive.
Now in the site, information of his new album is being showed. Title is “B is for Bob” Then, the music is being streamed. It is nice music for me. It makes me warmer and happier than I was. I want to buy the CD. If you listen the music, you will want to sing and dance intensely.
Next week, I went to concert of the musician that I like the best. He respects to him too. Then he is respected by a lot of musicians. He shows “love and peace ” for us by music. It was said that he stopped the fight that two parties happened in Jamaica by music. His thought and music affect authorized people. He is like a god. It is amazing.
The site teaches us about Bob Marley. His music and thought is affecting a lot of people now. Please check it out, and you will like him and can know him. Hi is a good musician.
Recently it is being cool. There are a lot of autumns in Kumamoto. In university, there are ginnan falling out. It is crazy smell. But I like autumn the best cuz the season is comfortable. So I often wanna read books, play sports. In October, athletic festival is hold in most elementary school. And there are a lot of delicious foods, which are pears, grapes, chestnuts, yellowtail, sauries…etc. Then there is no mosquito. It is good. Japan has 4 seasons, which are various features. It is good point of Japan. I can enjoy them, so I appreciate to birth in Japan. Thank you for my parents.
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In summer vacation, I went to Fukuoka city with my girl friend.
First day, we arrived at Tenjin by bus. Then we had dinner in Izakaya “Mugamuchu” there is comfortable and we had good foods. It is delicious.
Next day, we take a walk around Tenjin. My girlfriend is interested in clothes. So I was taken to various clothe shops. It is like my father. He is often had baggage’s by my mother. But It was very good time. I could know clothes she likes. After that, we went to Marinoa city, which there are many outlet shops and a biggest wheel in Japan. That wheel is so big and high, and we took on the wheel. I miss ground. It was so scary. I showed my not cool figure to her. Sorry. But view from top is so beautiful. We could look at lighting city in Fukuoka. I don’t forget that sight that look with her. That night, we went to Yatai in Nakasu, and had ramen and yakitori. Though staff’s face is dangerous, ramen is good.
Last day, we took a walk around Tenjin again. We went to used clothes shops. I like used clothes because old clothes are sturdy, cool and cheap. I got shoes. It is vintage shoes. It is cool. She got a jacket, boots and hunting cap. She was so happy. I was happy cuz her smile. It was interesting travel. I wanna go more distant places with her, and I wanna remember them.
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In this summer vacation, I went to Keya to participate in SUN SET LIVE 09’. This live has held for 17 years. Many artists take part in this live. For example, they are musicians, photographers and painters. The musicians sing songs that are rhythmical. And the hall was decollated many interesting pictures.
In keya, where are beautiful place, there are mountain, sea and beach. It is so comfortable.
I went out Kumamoto at 6 o’clock and I go take to Keya by train and taxi. Arrived the beach, first I drunk beer. I felt happy. Then, I listened songs my favorite artists sings. The music, sunrise and beautiful view made me pleasant. It is heaven. I have nothing to say. If I could do, I wanted be there.
Last, firework rose up the sky. I though as like ending summer. However I don’t know, I felt miss summer. I love summer better than any other seasons. Please come back, summer. I will go there next year.
I don’t forget the sun’s smell. See ya! See you summer!
And nice to meet you, Autumn!
First, I think that we should write and check our blogs. I must check spelling because there were spell misses in my blog and we can read them. Second, we should paste a lot of pictures I can and we can understand my essays, diaries and so on because of much information. Third, we should comment my friends’ blogs, we may check each other and we can enjoy writing.
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Hey guys, what’s up? Today, I went to the source of Shirakawa with my girl friend. It is said that there is the best water in Japan. It is delicious. The place is cooler than Kumamoto city. It was comfortable for us. In Japan, there is much water, but we have to take use the water preciously.
In lunch, we had box lunch cooked by her. I first was cooked. So I was happy, and it was so good. She told me “I don’t know good or bad ”, but it would be empty. She is pleased about it. I want her cook a box lunch next time.
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The bogging makes me have capacity to type words and use internet. It is good. But I didn’t write my diaries in the blog. Because I don’t use PC well. I often see Youtube and mixi only, so I should write my diaries next term.
Then I like book reviews because I understand how to write stories, thinking and words that I didn’t know… So I want to many books that I have never read. By the way, I bought the English book “Moomin” I want to finish reading by end of summer vacation. Then I should study Writing so hard.
There are many actors in the world. For example, there are Leonald DiCaprio, Angelina Jolie, Brad Pitt and so on. We love drams, TV and movies they act.
They get to become someone when they are acting. It is difficult. Then, a lot of movies, dramas were made by directors having entertainment capacities. There are art directors, sound directors, CG directors and so on. They are made by a lot of people. I was realized by the story that all capacities make a movie.
By the way, I want to be an actor in the future and I appear many TV programs and movies. Then I want to create drams too. I will happy, if everybody see the my acting’s and laugh, cry and think. So I practice acting everyday. See you next class.
(128 words)
I read the story “The Pizza That We Made”
By the way, have you cooked pizzas since you were born? I never have cooked. But I want to cook when I read this story.
The story has Suzanne, Max and Jake. They are cooks. First, they fill the flour in the cup and it is so soft and fine. Then they mix with a spoon, and mash, fold, push and mold. Next, they make the dough fly, spread in the pan. They pour the sauce. Then they picked cheese and green things. Last, they baked in the oven. It is how to cook the pizza by them.
I like pizza so much. It is like Okonomiyaki. I like Okonomiyaki better than pizza. But ways to cook are different. It is nice book. See you again.
(135 words)
I read the story “ THE ENORMOUS TURNIP”.
It is interesting story for me.
The farmer went to his field to get a turnip. He found a so big turnip with normal sizes. He decided to puck this one. He tugged so much and he was puffing and panting. His wife saw his appearance. She hugged the farmer with help to put the turnip. They both tugged and tugged. The boy, who is called Jack, saw his parents putting and panting. Then he helps. He held her skirt. They tugged until were red in the face. But it didn’t move. Farmer’s dog saw them puffing and panting, and he helps. He pulled Jack’s shirt. They all tugged and tugged. Next, a cat arrives and she bit the dog’s tail with help to put the turnip. The dog rips Jack’s shirt, he tore his mother’s skirt, she loses the farmer. They fell over. They try once again. A bird came. She pecked the cat’s tail. They all tugged and tugged, everybody say “Slowly, slowly, very very slowly and slowly…” then the turnip began to move. “It is Big!” the farmer said. “It is a Huge!” said his wife. Jack said “Enormous!” any others say “Woof!, meow!, Tweet!” the turnip was putted by them. I understand how to express the big size. By the way, how was the turnip used? It became to be so much soup. But it was too much to eat by them… see you.
(245 words)

If you are stranded in deserted island, how do you do?
Mr. Wyatt said to Tom, he is main character. He thought about it while the classes.
Then in afterschool, he finished basketball practices and he went to the bathroom. The school was almost deserted. Even Harvey, the cleaner had packed up.
But the door was shut tight. It wasn’t opened, so he is looked in here. Not sound came back, Tom couldn’t believe it, he was trapped. And he knocks the door, but his fists ached only. No one came. Then he remembered the phone! But the buttery couldn’t be flat already. He sagged down the wall. He thought… He decided to go out from the over the window. BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG! But it wasn’t opened. Then he found the switch on and off. He could see around. And The Harvey helped him. He could go out.
One day, one of my friends has stranded at toilet in HANSHIN department shop. He also has a phone that the battery couldn’t be flat. It was emergency! Then he stayed in here all night, next morning he went out. I was laughed to hear the news…
(196 words)
Main character was sad because his grandfather was gone.
His grandfather look like kid, he got many prizes for all kinds of things. He played golf and got a lot of prizes for golf. But his grandmother was angry to see them because there is no place to left in the house. Then his grandfather was good at magic, he was surprised at his magic… He was good grandfather for him. When I was 16 years old, I lost my grandfather and I became to be sad. I remembered the memories with his too. Then the story makes me remembered my grandfather. It is good story.
(106 words)
If you become not to be able to walk, what do you think?
The story is that a boy having played basketball became not to be able to walk.
David, he played basketball. On the morning, he went to his first ball game for the top team. Second later, there was loud screech of car breaks. And there were traffic rights out side the house. So David was attacked by car. When the ambulance arrived, he was lifted onto a stretcher and taken to hospital.
David was lucky to be alive. But his leg was too badly damaged to support him. He would be in a wheel chair. One day, Alex, he is David’s friend. He said to him “Shall we do?”
Before the accident, David is in a hurry everyday. After the accident, he was even worse. So he decided to start basketball.
It changed his life a lot. But there was a lot that didn’t change. Most importantly, David could still play it. He joined the wheelchair club team and played for the team. He practiced shooting for hours. He has to push his wheelchair for miles, and lift weight to build his arms muscle. So could play.
I had played basketball and I had hard things. So I respect him. Because he didn’t give up! He has a strong heart.
(223 words)
Student ID: 08154
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C
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Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 1-01a (2009.04.08) | Who Am I | 2009,4,15 | | 253 | 0 | | 0 | |
| 1-01b (2009.04.20) | My University Life | 2009,5,20 | | 164 | 1 | | 0 | |
| (1-01c) | University Life | 2009,6,24 | | 254 | 0 | | 0 | |
| 1-02a (2009.06.01) | How to Enjoy University Life | 2009,624 | | 252 | 1 | | 0 | |
| 1-02b (2009.07.06) | Learning From Lilo and Stitch | 2009,7,1 | | 403 | 0 | | 0 | |
| (1-02c) | Thinking About Lilo And Stitch | 2009,7,15 | | 386 | 0 | | 1 | |
| 1-03a (2009.06.29) | | | | | | | | |
| 1-03b (2009.07.13) | | | | | | | | |
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¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
| Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | | | | |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | | | | |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | | | | |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | | | | |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | | |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | | | | |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | | |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
| Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
| BR 1-01 | Star Reporter (Book Review 1) | 2009.05.20 | 454 | 0 |
| BR 1-02 | Dreamtime Painters ~Book Review 2~ | 2009.06.05 | 344 | 0 |
| BR 1-03 | Taiko Master ~Book Review 3~ | 2009.06.05 | 302 | 0 |
| BR 1-04 | Cambodia Animal Rescue ~Book Review 4~ | 2009.06.09 | 275 | 0 |
| BR 1-05 | Bruno's Tea ~Book Review 5~ | 2009.06.16 | 141 | 0 |
| BR 1-06 | Not Again ~Book Review 6~ | 2009.07.15 | 223 | 0 |
| BR 1-07 | Saying GoodBye ~Book Review 7~ | 2009.07.15 | 106 | 0 |
| BR 1-08 | All About Meat ~Book Review 8~ | 2009.07.15 | 51 | 0 |
| BR 1-09 | Trapped ~Book Review 9 ~ | 2009.07.15 | 196 | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | | |
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| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | | |
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What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
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Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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